Thursday, March 6, 2008

Assignment 3 part2












The revised draft with a few changes.
1) Removed the previous first picture, since it is quite unnecessary
2) Changed the ball kicking picture, from 1picture to 2.
3) Added the recall part where what actually happened

So now this is what the picture says
1) Some guy is taking a penalty shoot out
2) He is kicking the ball
3) He kicked the ball
4) The goal keeper tries to save something
5) He found out that he caught a shoe
6) And the ball went into the goal
7) Recall1: The guy kicked the ball
8) Recall2: The ball and the shoe flew
9) The guy's shoe is missing
10) The guy is blushing

The initial picture that was there was removed as I felt that it was quite redundant. The kicking of the ball picture was changed. Also it has increased from 1 picture to 2 picture. Initially it was the moment the leg was contacting the ball during the kicking process, now it is the beginning and end of the kicking of the ball sequence, so now it is sort of using interpolation of 2 picture to convey the idea of kicking the ball to make things clearer. The recall part was added to explain things to the viewer so that they have a clearer idea of the what actually happened. At first the classmates only suggested adding 1 picture for the recalling, but I felt that only 1 picture is quite brief so I added in the again the picture3 but also in black and white to show that it is part of the recalling of past events. Now with 2 picture in the recall part the viewers should know that it was the kicking of the ball followed by the flying of the shoe along with the ball that had happened.

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