Problems/suggestions mention about the previous draft in the class.
1) it's not abstract enough, as people can still tell that it is a car.
2) simplify it more
3) leaving the last one as a box and 2 circle only
4) maybe just wheels or steering wheels only for the last one
5) using of more simple shapes
The first and second picture remains the same as the previous draft. A drawing of a car with much details in it. The 4th picture from the previous draft is now being the 3rd car in the current work. i have decided to be so, since I am undergoing more transformation and simplification from the 1st to the 6th car, so i am going to hasten the transformation process. Initially the 3rd car in the current picture does not exist in this picture, but someone commented that the transformation is too hasty and somethings seems to be missing which made me felt so. Feeling like jumping from a lot of details with realistic lines to less details and more simple lines. The 3rd car added now is to split the process into 2, by reducing the details and elements in the car first. I have decided to add in the 3rd car in this picture now. by the 3rd car most of the elements are still there with realistic outlines of those elements.
However, the 4th picture have the outlines of the car being changed. From realistic outlines being changed to just straight lines. As mentioned above, the previous car was to reduce the details and the current car is there to show the car after having more simple lines. All the curvy realistic outlines of the cars are now being replaced by straight lines except the 2 wheels. The handle of the door is also removed in this picture since I find it as part of the line simplifying process. Nevertheless the basic elements remains.
In the next car, the 5th car more elements are being removed. The door and the light is being removed, but not the windows and the wheel. I feel that these 2 are the real basic elements of the car and it identifies it to be a car a lot as compared to the headlight and the door. Therefore, these 2 elements are still kept in this stage. The window is further simplified by combining into 1 window. The general outline of the car is now being further simplified and is goings towards being a 'box made" type of car feeling. It is simplifying the general outline of the car towards a box shape.
In the last car, the 6th car, the car now only consist of basic shapes of 2 rectangles and 2 circles.
The window is being removed. This is how someone would construct a toy car given a few wooden blocks and circles. A simple car with the 2 of the most simple shapes. With this it ends the series of transformation.
2 comments:
Okay.. I hope our peers like your new box car. =D
I thought though the 2nd draft now has more of the element of "abstraction" especially the last picture. But somehow the transaction seems too abrupt and in a way it seems to deliberate an attempt.. perhaps you might want to make the "transformation" more gradual. =)
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